tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post8133836456169143286..comments2023-10-10T08:40:11.374-07:00Comments on Coffee with life: The god of small things ...arunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05282510458129850473noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-16469200024420229472010-06-21T03:37:12.021-07:002010-06-21T03:37:12.021-07:00good post.... thought provoking... it has to be do...good post.... thought provoking... it has to be done by youths mainly. i feel they are the one who could bring these changesThiyagarajan Srinivasanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16997353244668970881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-31355902030357660632010-05-26T06:26:05.825-07:002010-05-26T06:26:05.825-07:00Awesome writing Arun...... Made me eyes go moist a...Awesome writing Arun...... Made me eyes go moist after reading it...... I think the best part of ur writing is that u put urself in the writing..... IT feels real and touching because IT IS REALmeeranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-52418463985497877442010-05-25T10:26:00.610-07:002010-05-25T10:26:00.610-07:00@gitanjali n lakshmi
Great to know that you could ...@gitanjali n lakshmi<br />Great to know that you could relate to my scribblings. Thks for ur support and do keep comin back..<br /><br />@anonymous<br />Thks for the honest feedback. will definitely work on it ..do come back and hope I would not disappoint you the next time...<br /><br />excited to be alive,<br />arunarunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05282510458129850473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-87714795690632900752010-05-25T08:03:09.077-07:002010-05-25T08:03:09.077-07:00Hi Arun.
I liked ur post. But there are several th...Hi Arun.<br />I liked ur post. But there are several things I would point out to you, none of which of course deals with the content. The content undoubtedly was thought provoking to say the least. It was emotional journey..at times taking the reader to the deep abysses of depression and hopelessness but eventually resurrecting them to a world of hope and optimism. I completely endorsed the story behind the lines. But just a couple of times, and mind you only a couple of times, I found your style a bit jarring, prolix and slightly repetitive. For one thing, your sentences are a bit too long. Multiple thoughts transcend into each other without a meaningful pause. being a writer myself, I understand the temptation is huge to just go on venting your inner feelings but then, you would also want your readers to enjoy reading the piece as much as you did penning it. So for next time, hope to see a bit shorter sentences wherein I don't loose the initial cue I began reading from. and last but not the least, very few writers can evoke graphic descriptions as u did. Keep it up! Hope to see the next one soon! All the best!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-50391954107400608652010-05-24T04:11:33.530-07:002010-05-24T04:11:33.530-07:00nice one ... really thought provoking!!
i wish i ...nice one ... really thought provoking!! <br />i wish i could say more ... but at a loss of words..Lakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04634326515419468379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325884109647945665.post-86712217473914717742010-05-23T23:35:44.918-07:002010-05-23T23:35:44.918-07:00brilliant post! It gave me goosebumps. Few people ...brilliant post! It gave me goosebumps. Few people have the ability to use words on a way that will make the reader think and feel the author's joy or pain. I suppose one can count you among those. Cheers, mate!gitanjalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01103964746825473309noreply@blogger.com